IELTS writing task 2/IELTS Sample essay:
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons
for your answer.
You should write at least 250 words.
Band 9 Sample Answer:
The use of
fossil fuels as a source of energy have been increasing since the industrial
revolution began. There is a view that the most important step we can take
today is to prioritize research and development into other forms of energy
that are safe. In my view, I completely agree that we need to halt the extraction
of fossil fuels while also investing more heavily in greener energy sources.
The first
step in curbing the damage caused by fossil fuel use must be to phase out
extraction and use. That is, mining, fracking, deep-sea drilling, and other
methods need to be stopped in order to end the damage such activities cause to
ecosystems and the atmosphere. Indeed, ending oil drilling alone would greatly
reduce the risk of environmental disasters such as the BP spill in the Gulf of
Mexico which had a catastrophic and far-reaching impact on marine life, air, and
water quality. The burning of coal and the use of petrol, oil, and gas in industry
and transport also contributes to the greenhouse gases that are causing climate
change and poor air quality globally. Clearly, steps need to be taken to
eliminate these sources of energy and promote alternatives.
To replace
fossil fuels, greener energy sources must be further developed. Currently,
although solar, wind, and hydropower systems are available, they are not yet
able to provide the vast quantities required to keep nations supplied with
their energy requirements. Solar panels, for instance, are still prohibitively
expensive for many households and businesses to install. Wind power too has
limitations in terms of energy production and reliability; it only works when
the wind blows. Unless these alternatives are improved and made more
affordable, it will simply not be possible to end fossil fuel use. Investment,
not only by governments but also by organizations and individuals, is crucial
to bridge this gap.
In
conclusion, improving ways of producing energy other than by the use of fossil
fuels is of paramount importance today. Given that it is currently not possible
to rely fully on green energy, greater investment is urgently needed.
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